Well, there is no alliteration or assonance, and just a modicum of sibilance. Alliteration involves the beginnings of adjacent or closely connect words, assonance is repetition of vowel sounds that create an echo effect; and as sibilance refers to a hissing effect (usually achieved with multiple unvoiced s sounds — as in the word susurrus), and there is only one such sound in your example, I'm not sure what you're going for here? Perhaps if you described the quality you see in sudden departures that is noteworthy to you, we might be able to see what you're really asking.
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